Don’t ever doubt
In me
Sun always rises
A promise renewed
In me
The prophets believed
The change that we need
In me
Circles within circles
Timeless knowledge
Sacred secrets whispered under the stars
The truth within lies
In me
Dark days and bright nights
Lust for love
The desire to fly
Childish dreams
In me
Have died and been replaced
With patience
Lost angels cry to give the city rain as
Sorrow tattoos my sins across my back
They form
A road map to the infinite
In me
Buddha and Jesus live
Laughing as I realize
There are no mistakes!
Each step we ever took was always one step
Closer to God
In me
Saturday, January 24, 2009
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2 comments:
The structure of this piece is interesting. How did you decide how many lines to put in between the "In me"s? Or was that even a consideration? Was this your own thang or for class? (well I guess either way it's your own thang, hehe)
I did take time to consider it but it was considered sporadically! haha. I just short of threw them in where they seemed to fit, but there was no number considered. Id like to tidy this poem up and repost soon. I enjoy the potential, disappointed with the result.
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