Friday, August 22, 2008

Sensei started it! (or something)

If I should wake and you had died
Id slowly start to close my eyes
To see your spirit start to fly
Straight for the pale white moon

Your brilliance night could never hide
No brighter star has ever shined
And all your friends will have to cry
That you had left so soon

A star must fall after its rise
After the fall it grows in size!
It may take a thousand times
But you will find your truth

4 comments:

defmoose said...

Battle of the poems eh?

If I should respawn before you die
I'd mount up and start a battle cry
To heal your hp before you fall
FOR THE HORDE! Or not at all.

Cyrusse said...

hehe we have a winner!

Black Crow said...

it did make me laugh out loud, that could be it, but its only one stanza, no fair no fair, I call shenanigans.

Black Crow said...

and besides, I just remembered (hehe), mine isnt supposed to be competing with Sensei's poem. lol. It was a tribute! that means I was so inspired by the initial that I dared to write a response, in the literary world thats not a competition, thats big time props! silly Moose, your so American some times.