Friday, February 20, 2009

Time for a pee-ku revival?


Now here is a piece I call "walking home from work in the winter":

sun shines without warmth
sharp wind makes me have to pee
toilet's far away

3 comments:

Black Crow said...

lmfao, I love pee-kus but, I dont have the skill of sensei, I cant emberass myself by posting an example here, lets just say, you win sensei, you be the best. and also, what made you think of making the first pee-ku? your like the guy that invented jazz or something. maybe one day there will be books filled with different pee-kus or maybe itl catch on through the net after random folks see it on our blog, it just seems to have potential.

Cyrusse said...

Well, in researching the history of pee-ku, I believe Lorigga may have coined the term since the first pee-ku post doesn't mention it:
http://in-the-cup.blogspot.com/2008/03/work-crappy-haiku-type-thing.html

As for how they came to exist at all, work makes me go a little nutty sometimes. Yeah.. that's the best I can come up with hehe. And I drink too much tea and it has to go somewhere.

Black Crow said...

ewwwww. hehe. art is gross sometimes.