Thursday, July 10, 2008

Its the time (From my heart version)

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The painting is entitled "Buddha" by Octavio Ocampo
If anyone desires the old version I can post in a sip but I think this is more what I had in mind to begin with, or should I say this is more what I had in heart......

Flames ignite within my heart
Signaling its time to start
Rethinking the ancient art
Even writers play their part
Someone has to share the dream
For it to be reality

So I’ll share my dream with you
Birds did fly in skies of blue
And everyone you ever knew
Was part of one eternal truth
All were united as One
Sins of mankind were undone

Love reigned supreme once again!
No one was without a friend
Nobody had to pretend
Everything perfectly Zen
Prince of Peace reclaimed his place
Baring Buddha’s smiling face

2 comments:

Lorigga said...

Man, you're growing crazy style. You know, iv'e only dabbled in creating art which reflects the oneness of everything. It's was quite an experience in which I had to really think about what it all means to me and how best to convey it.

I love that you continually create poems that reflect your own relationship to oneness, spirituality, our interconnectedness.

This poem comes off very professional to me. It's easy to read it and imagine I'm reading something from a published book of poems. Then I have to remind myself that this is CROW!

And I smile.

Black Crow said...

far too kind, I personally dont think too much of my own writing (I have very high standards with Poe as my inspiration!) but there is one thing Ill give myself credit for, I really try hard to convey my spiritual standings in a way that accurately reflects my beliefs without distorting them. I think its that careful consideration that ends up giving the work "my touch" or Id like to believe it gives the work heart, and hopefully meaning. thanks for any consideration given.